Loving seeing everyon'es crafts, there are sooo many very talented people out there. I have finished another Memory Box I only brought the lid on the road with me and I have included a piccy of my first bird painting. It is a Tui a NZ native bird and the flowers are Kowhai also a NZ native flora
Would really appreciate some constructive criticism I know Ive made a mistake at the bottom of the wings on the left hand side but not sure why it doesnt look right can anyone help?
Regards Judes
-- Edited by Judes and Bazz on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:07:48 PM
-- Edited by Judes and Bazz on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:08:20 PM
Hi, it is really very nice. If I may offer my opinion, I think the wing is a bit short and it should maybe be more tapered (sharper) and blend more into the body and tail. But in saying that, the pic is great as it is . Bear is perfect.
Cheers,
Peter
-- Edited by bloomoon on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:20:24 PM
-- Edited by bloomoon on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:29:39 PM
Judes and Bazz said
05:43 AM Oct 15, 2013
Hey Peter,
Thanks!! thats it!! Ive looked and looked and for the life of me couldnt see what was wrong but you have found it. Thank you. Will remember that next one I do.
Oh look at that piccy its blue and I thought it was a shiny green lol. Will use yours next time! lol
Judes
freehazzas said
05:51 PM Oct 15, 2013
Im not much good for critism yet having just started. Love the bear. I would work on getting more detail in the bird, which is what i am trying to learn at the moment. Taking more time over details.
Judes and Bazz said
04:34 AM Oct 16, 2013
Thankyou freehazzas
neilnruth said
04:32 AM Oct 18, 2013
I'm so glad Cindy started this segment. It's great. Well done all you talented artists.
Hello everyone,
Loving seeing everyon'es crafts, there are sooo many very talented people out there.
I have finished another Memory Box I only brought the lid on the road with me and I have included a piccy of my first bird painting. It is a Tui a NZ native bird and the flowers are Kowhai also a NZ native flora
Would really appreciate some constructive criticism I know Ive made a mistake at the bottom of the wings on the left hand side but not sure why it doesnt look right can anyone help?
Regards Judes
-- Edited by Judes and Bazz on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:07:48 PM
-- Edited by Judes and Bazz on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:08:20 PM
Hi, it is really very nice. If I may offer my opinion, I think the wing is a bit short and it should maybe be more tapered (sharper) and blend more into the body and tail. But in saying that, the pic is great as it is . Bear is perfect.
Cheers,
Peter
-- Edited by bloomoon on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:20:24 PM
-- Edited by bloomoon on Monday 14th of October 2013 10:29:39 PM
Hey Peter,
Thanks!! thats it!! Ive looked and looked and for the life of me couldnt see what was wrong but you have found it. Thank you. Will remember that next one I do.
So good a fellow Nomad can offer helpful advice
Regards Judes
Thanks
Oh look at that piccy its blue and I thought it was a shiny green lol. Will use yours next time! lol
Judes
Thankyou freehazzas